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Kelbie
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Which one do you think is best?




Any feedback would be really nice ;)
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kick ass bro nice work
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Costello
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Post by Costello »

In both videos the use of text is appalling. The second video is pretty much a blatant copy of the Battlefield 3 trailer with 'join us now' plastered on the end of it, so the first one is better. However, since the text is so poor in both, use a font similar to the Battlefield font and put the text in black fades, as not only can't you read it on the clips, but it distracts you from the editing. Apart from that, the editing in the first video is pretty good.
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Thanks Costello.
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Post by Picard »

Good work, but I am with Costello the font and color of the first video is really bad, also the actual sentences could maybe be altered somehow, they sound a bit easy and cliché.
Thank you,
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I'll be making a better one later.
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